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第三篇文章 大家好。今天我要跟你说话关于邮局。 我不常常去邮局。邮局离我的家很远。到邮局得走半个多小时！我也认为邮局又不方便又不现代化。现在我们有电邮，所以邮局无用。 谢谢你的阅读！ Hi everyone. Today I want to talk with you about the post office. I don't often go to the post office. It's very far from my house. It takes over a half an hour to walk to the post office! I also believe the post office isn't convenient or modern. Nowadays we have email, so the post office is useless. Thanks for reading.

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第三篇文章

大家好。今天我要跟你说话关于邮局。
大家好。今天我要说的话题是关于邮局。
我不常常去邮局。邮局离我的家很远。到邮局得走半个多小时！我也认为邮局又不方便又不现代化。现在我们有电邮，所以邮局无用。
我不常常去邮局。（因为）邮局离我的家很远。到邮局得走半个多小时，我认为邮局不方便又不现代化。现在我们有电邮，所以邮局没有太大的用处。
无用太绝对了所以前面要加上一些限制词。 “无用”means that postoffice is useless in our life，we can't use it at any time，but it is too confirmed ，too abosolutely，so why not add some predeterminer before the word 用处，（因为）括号处可省略
又 means while ，we usually do not use twice in one sentence ，except some spicial situation。
这个小女孩又漂亮又好看。 but 漂亮 and 好看 has the same meaning
谢谢你的阅读！

Hi everyone. Today I want to talk with you about the post office.

I don't often go to the post office. It's very far from my house. It takes over a half an hour to walk to the post office! I also believe the post office isn't convenient or modern. Nowadays we have email, so the post office is useless.

Thanks for reading.
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第三篇文章

大家好。今天我要跟你说关于邮局的事情。

我不常常去邮局。邮局离我的家很远。到邮局得走半个多小时！我也认为邮局既不方便又不现代化。现在我们有电邮，所以邮局没有用。

谢谢你的阅读！

Hi everyone. Today I want to talk with you about the post office.

I don't often go to the post office. It's very far from my house. It takes over a half an hour to walk to the post office! I also believe the post office isn't convenient or modern. Nowadays we have email, so the post office is useless.

Thanks for reading.

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