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WONDER - SUMMER HOMERWORKS ABOUT "WONDER" THE BOOK: The book was written in 2008 by R. Palacio, an American writer. Quickly the book was a best seller and a few years later was made a movie about her book. This book is apropiate for childrens or adults, because it's a story about a child. Auggie lives in EEUU with his parents, his dog and his big sister. He has a medical condition and his face is deformed. He has had a lot of problems more because his condition and he had a lot of surgeries in his childhood. He´ve never gone to the school, her mother teaching him. But this year, the year to start 5th grade, the family decides to Auggie start in school. The first day, Julian, start to bullies him for his appearance. But Auggie gets a few friends. Early Julian starts to manipulate his friends. Auggie is very sad, he is alone. But the principal suspended Julian for several weeks and Auggie is happy again. At the end of the year, all the students (less Julian) are invited to a school trip. And a Auggie is attacked by 6th graders and they broke his hearing aids (there are very expensive and he needs this to hear correctly) Finally Auggie gets graduate with his colleages and Julian start the next year in other school.

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WONDER - SUMMER HOMEWORK

About the Book Wonder

The book Wonder was written in 2008 by R. Palacio, an American writer. The book quickly became a best seller, and a few years later was made into a movie. about her book.
This book is appropriate for childrens or adults, because it's a story about a child.

Auggie lives in the United States with his parents, his dog and his big sister. He has a medical condition and his face is deformed. He has had a lot of problems more because of his condition, and he has had a lot of surgeries during his childhood. He has never gone to the school, his mother educates him.

But This year, the year he starts 5th grade, his family decides (or: his parents decide) to send Auggie to school.
On the first day, (a boy named) Julian bullies him because of his appearance, but Auggie makes a few friends. Soon after that, Julian starts to manipulate Auggie's friends. He becomes very sad and feels all alone.

The principal suspends Julian for several weeks and Auggie is happy again.

At the end of the year, all the students (except Julian) are invited (to go) on a school trip. (While there,) Auggie is attacked by 6th graders who break his hearing aids (they are very expensive and he needs them to hear correctly).

Finally Auggie gets to graduate with his classmates, and Julian must start the next year in another school.


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WONDER - SUMMER HOMERWORKS

ABOUT "WONDER" THE BOOK:

The book was written in 2008 by R. Palacio, an American writer. Quickly the book was a best seller and a few years later (it) was made (into) a movie about her book.
This book is appropriate for childrens (children) or (and) adults, because it's a story about a child.

Auggie lives in EEUU with his parents, his dog and his big sister. He has a medical condition and his face is deformed. He has had a lot of problems more because his condition and he had a lot of surgeries in his childhood. He´ve (has) never gone to the school, her (his) mother teaching (teaches/has taught) him.

But this year, the year to start 5th grade, the family decides to (enroll) Auggie start in school.
The first day, Julian, start (starts) to bullies (bully) him for his appearance. But Auggie gets a few friends. Early (Later,) Julian starts to manipulate his friends. Auggie is (becomes) very sad, (because) he is alone.

But the principal suspended Julian for several weeks and Auggie is (becomes) happy again.

At the end of the year, all the students (less Julian) are invited to a school trip. And a Auggie is attacked by 6th graders and they broke break his hearing aids (there are very expensive and he needs this to hear correctly)

Finally Auggie gets (to) graduate with his colleages and Julian start (starts) the next year in other (another) school.

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