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I GOT A JOB Hi everyone, I haven't been here for days because I've been finding a job these days. Shop assistant this is what I'm going to be, I'm work in MianYang branch of China telecom. It's a challenge for me because I'm not good at speaking, but I believe that this job can change me in good ways and I can do it. GOD BLESS ME ^.^

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I GOT A JOB

Hi everyone, I haven't been here for days because I've been 1) looking for finding a job these days. 2) I'm going to be a shop assistant working at the MianYang branch of China Telecom.  Shop assistant this is what I'm going to be, I'm work in MianYang branch of China telecom. It's a challenge for me because I'm not good at speaking, but I believe that this job can change me in a good way, and I can do it.

3)GOD BLESS ME ^.^ 

1) To look for 和 to find 的意思不同;通常,前者的意思為尋找,而後者為找到。

2) I'm work這個句子我看不懂。 如果是現在進行時的話,應該是I'm working。 不過,好像你還沒有開始工作,所以你應該寫I'm going to be(表示未來)。

3) God bless me這個句子聽起來未免有點驕傲,你似乎在命令神非得祝福你不可! (不好意思,這麼直接地講)。 或許寫May God Bless Me比較好。  (但願神祝福我.)

恭喜! 我聽說在中國找到工作實在是不容易。

另外,你是基督徒嗎? 神祝福你!

 

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谢谢大家咯 同喜哈
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Congratulations!
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That is great to hear! Remember that challenges are best faced head on. It is amazing how things that challenge us always make us stronger and better in the end. God Bless you! Ryan
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congratulation

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