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That will you do on the way?
In the plane I will sleep. I have a fear of flying. When you are sleeping the time goes faster. But at the bird's-eye view you can see a beautiful panorama. I would like to see solar eclipse through a fly's window. Some people say that a northern lights is especially beautiful. On a train I usually sleep or listen music. When a train goes fast whatch changing nature and looking for smalls towns at the stations is very interesting.
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Please correct this text
What will you do on the way?
I will sleep during the flight. (I have changed it a bit to look more natural :))I have a fear of flying. When you are sleeping, the time goes faster. But at the bird's-eye view you can see a beautiful panorama. I would like to see a/the solar eclipse through the plane's window. Some people say that the northern lights are especially beautiful. On a train, I usually sleep or listen music. When the train goes fast, I watch nature changing and looking for small towns at the stations. It's very interesting.
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Please correct this text
That will you do on the way?
In the plane I will sleep. I have a fear of flying. When you are sleeping the time goes faster. But at the bird's-eye view you can see a beautiful panorama. I would like to see solar eclipse through a fly's window. Some people say that a northern lights is especially beautiful. On a train I usually sleep or listen music. When a train goes fast whatch changing nature and looking for smalls towns at the stations is very interesting.
Points:
- View is good, but you can use outlook, sound good too;
- Watch instead whatch;
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