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Studying english #1 Today I woke up around 5:20am but I was lazy so I stayed in my bed until 5:40am. My wish was to stay in my bed until late but I couldn’t because I needed to go to work. I got out of bed, I got dressed and made my breakfast. Around 6:20am, I went to bus stop to wait the bus. I arrived 7:10am at my work but before that, I went to the supermarket to buy some fruits and cookies to eat during the day. I finished my work at 4:40pm and I came back to my home. I arrived around 6:30pm and my mom had already made the dinner. I spent a time in couch and watched TV. I needed to wash my hair so I took a shower and now, I’m in my bed writing this and trying to study English.

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Studying english #1

Today I woke up around 5:20am but I was lazy so I stayed in my bed until 5:40am. My wish was to stay in my bed until later but I couldn’t because I needed to go to work. I got out of bed, I got dressed and made my breakfast. Around 6:20am, I went to the bus stop to wait for the bus. I arrived to work at 7:10am, but before that, I went to the supermarket to buy some fruits and cookies to eat during the day. I finished my work at 4:40pm and I came back to my home. I arrived around 6:30pm and my mom had already made the dinner. I spent a time on the couch and watched TV. I needed to wash my hair, so I took a shower, and now, I’m in my bed writing this and trying to study English.

Well done, Carol! I would focus on studying articles and prepositions a little bit. Great work. Keep it up!
-Sarah

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