Cuatro Ciénegas, a beautifil place!!!
Hello everybody.
Two weeks ago I went a beautiful place call "Cuatro Ciénegas". This place is in Coahuila, México, and is very interesting beacuse has some unique animals, plants and bacterias. There, I learned that this place is surrounded by mountains and this have protected the place and its founa and flora, even bacterias, but now some species are extint, we have lost turtles, fishes and bacterias that were considered fosiles alive.
This place still have "estromatolitos", that are bacterial cluster, of thoseones that scientifics belive started to fill the wather with oxigen million of years ago. That's why they say evolution stoped in this beautiful place.
Unfurtunately, the agriculture and some idustries have overexploited the wather, and now the stability and life in this place are in high risk.
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Cuatro Ciénegas, a beautiful place!!!
Hello everybody.
Two weeks ago I went to a beautiful place called, "Cuatro Ciénegas". This place is in Coahuila, México, and is very interesting because has some of its' unique animals, plants and bacteria. There, I learned that this place Cuatro Ciénegas (better to use the name of the location here, helps to remind the reader what they are reading about.) is surrounded by mountains. and this have protected the place and its founa and flora, even bacteria, but now some species are extinct, we have lost turtles, fishes and bacteria that were considered fossils alive.
- The is generally confusing. I would think about how the mountains protected the land and what change occurred that resulted in the extinction of the animals.
Unfortunately, the agriculture and some industries (give examples of the industries. ex. Logging)have over exploited the weather, and now the stability and life of ___ (who's life is in danger?) in this place are in high risk.
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I tried to correct the basic spelling errors and provide notes, or points of highlighted interests. There are many ways to improve this paragraph, I think you're on the right track. Just keep trying and you'll be able to create more cohesive sentences as time goes on.
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