TOEFL writing section "please help me!"
Why do you think some people are attracted by dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thinking about animal’s nature, maybe humans are the strangest creature that exist until know. Being realistic there are a lot of weird activities that we like to do and to be attracted by dangerous activities it is one of those. Personally, I do not always put myself in dangerous activities, but I have a desire related with it, that I will describe here.
We can create a big list of different types of dangerous sports or activities that people enjoy to practice. The first thing that comes to mind is sports like parachute, hang gliding, buggee jump. Some people like to put themselves in dangerous, keeping contact with hazardous animals like poisonous snakes, spiders, sharps, big animals like lions and tigers. Another one likes to eat dangerous food like a puffer fish that produce a deadly toxin, tetrodotoxin that blocks the cellular excitability which, if swallowed, may lead to death. Of course, there are specialized cooks that makes it perfect without poison but eat the fish it is a risk.
Personally, I have a dream to put myself in a dangerous activity. I want to dive with sharps. I love the ocean nature and I look forward to feeling the peace of the ocean and see the aquatics animals’ beauty. I do not know why I just have the desire to do this before to death. It is odd because while I feel exciting to dive, would be terrifying to me do another type of dangerous activities, like a wrote before.
It is not rational to endanger yourself and if I will try to think about a reason why some people feel pleasure in a dangerous situation. Sure, I will get confused. In conclusion, maybe our DNA are programmed for.
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TOEFL writing section "please help me!"
Why do you think some people are attracted by dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Thinking about animal’s nature (or animal nature), maybe humans are the strangest creature that exists until know. Being realistic there are a lot of weird activities that we like to do and to be [1] attracted by dangerous activities it is one of those. Personally, I do not always put myself in dangerous situations [2], but I have a desire related to it, that I will describe here.
We can create a big list of different types of dangerous sports or activities that people enjoy to practicing. The first thing that comes to mind is sports like sky diving [3], hang gliding, bungee jumping. Some people like to put themselves in dangerous, having contact with hazardous animals like poisonous snakes, spiders, sharks [4], big animals like lions and tigers. Another one likes to eat dangerous food like a puffer fish that produce a deadly toxin, tetrodotoxin that blocks the cellular excitability which, if swallowed, may lead to death. Of course, there are specialized cooks that makes it perfect without poison but eating the fish it is a risk.
Personally, I have a dream to put myself in a dangerous activity. I want to dive with sharks. I love the ocean nature and I look forward to feeling the peace of the ocean and seeing the aquatics animals’ beauty. I do not know why, I just have the desire to do this before to death. It is odd because while I feel excited to dive, it would be terrifying to me do another type of dangerous activity, like a wrote before.
It is not rational to endanger yourself and if I will try to think about a reason why some people feel pleasure in a dangerous situation. Sure, I will get confused. In conclusion, maybe our DNA is programmed for it.
[1] You can also say "and being attracted to..."
[2] The idiom is "put myself in dangerous situations." Or you could say "participate in dangerous activities."
[3] In English, jumping out of an airplane with a parachute is called "sky diving"
[4] Em inglês, o tuburão é chamado "shark"
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