Formal Letter
Dear Mr Smith,
thank you for letting us stay in your appartment next week. We are looking forward to our trip. However, I'd like to ask some questions regarding the accomodation.
First, do you provide sheets or do we need to bring our own? Second, since will not have a car, how far is the next supermarket? Is there a bus station nearby? Other than that we are thinking about bringing our dog, would that be allowed?
Best regards,
DD.
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Formal Letter
Dear Mr Smith,Thank you for letting us stay in your apartment next week. We are looking forward to our trip. However, I'd like to ask some questions regarding the accommodation.
First, do you provide sheets or do we need to bring our own? Second, since we will not have a car, how far is the next closest supermarket? Is there a bus station nearby? Other than that we are thinking about bringing our dog, would that be allowed? (*1)
Best regards,
DD.
Overall: You can remove the "First" and "Second". Otherwise, you kind of need to add a "Third, is there....". It's much nicer to just remove the unnecessary numbering of the questions. i.e. "Do you..." "Since we ...." "Is there ..."
(*1) Finally, we are thinking about bringing our dog. Would that be allowed?
In all, very well done. Only a few minor spelling issues, etc.
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