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I like nature because I often walk in the garden or in the forest. I try to cook a healthy food like vegetable salads, fruits, lemonade and smoothies. I dont recycle glass, plastic and metall because in my city it isn't developed. However I try to use less plastic bags everyday. I hope that the ecological situation will start to change.
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Because I like nature, because I often walk in the garden or in the forest. I try to cook a eat and drink healthy food things like vegetable salads, fruits, lemonade and smoothies. I don't recycle glass, plastic and metal because in my city it isn't developed available. However I try to use less plastic bags everyday. I hope that the ecological situation will start to change.
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I like nature because I often walk in the garden or in the forest. I try to cook a healthy food like vegetable salads, fruits, lemonade and smoothies. I dont recycle glass, plastic and metal because in my city it isn't developed. However I try to use less plastic bags everyday. I hope that the ecological situation will start to change.
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I’d like to suggest the following changes:
1) I like nature because I often walk in the garden or in the forest. =>
I like nature and I often walk in the garden or in the forest. OR
I often walk in the garden or in the forest because I like nature.
2) I try to cook a healthy food like vegetable salads, fruits, lemonade and smoothies. =>
I try to cook healthy food like fruit and vegetable salads, lemonade and smoothies.
OR …cook healthy meals like….
3) I don’t recycle glass, plastic and metal because in my city it isn't developed. =>
I don’t recycle glass, plastic and metal because I can’t do it myself and there are no recycling facilities in my city.
4) However I try to use less plastic bags everyday.
less=> fewer plastic bags OR less plastic
I hope that the ecological situation will start to change. OK
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