first class（Please help me modify it）
I take first class in italki this morning.My teacher's name is Alex.He is a British working in Shanghai.He asked me what I needed to learn in advance.I told him that I was retired and often traveled around the world.I wanted to learn English especially improve my conversational skills.I want to be more independent when I travel.He teaches very well ,but my English is not good enough and I can't understand some words.I think as long as I keep studying ,I will improve.
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first class（Please help me modify it）
I took （过去时，take是现在时） first class on italki this morning.My teacher's name is Alex.He is a British working in Shanghai.He asked me what I needed to learn in advance.I told him that I was retired and often traveled around the world.I wanted to learn English especially to improve my conversational skills.I want to be more independent when I travel.He teaches very well ,but my English is not good enough so （“so” 比 “and”更好，连接前后两句话更有逻辑）I can't understand some words. But I think as long as I keep studying ,I will improve.
of course you will improve！very good job！
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这篇怎么写的那么好，有没有帮过你啊？语法基本都对
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