COMMENT WASHINGTON SQUARE
Washington Square is a real beautiful novel, which involve you to read more and more. This novel is not the usual love story with an happy ending, but his the story of a real brave girl who decided to go against her father only for love someone, but later to give up to her father and totally break the relationship. For me is a story from which take and realize that in life is important yes love but always with friends and family around you, and family is a group of people big or little that is for who you can do or left everything only for be happy together.
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COMMENT WASHINGTON SQUARE
Washington Square is a really beautiful novel, which involve invites you to read more and more. This novel is not the usual love story with an happy ending, but his the story of a really brave girl who decided to go against her father only for love someone (several ways of saying this: for the love of someone; for love; for loving someone; because she lowed someone), but later to give up in to her father and totally break the relationship (that's understandable but a bit awkward... probably say " and completely end the relationship") . For me it is a story from which take and realize that in life is important yes love but always with friends and family around you, and family is a group of people big or little that is for who you can do or left everything only for be happy together.
OK - that last bit doesn't really make sense so let me try to re-write it (hopefully what you mean):
For me, it is a story from which I realize that in life love is important but always with friends and family around you; and family is a group of people, big or little, who whatever you do, or whatever you leave will be happy together.
(Not entirely sure you meant that in the last bit but I was struggling a bit with the long sentence where it wasn't really clear which verbs referred to which people - hope it helps).
Regarding real/really - I think in American English "real" is sometimes used as an adverb (as in "real good") but not in UK English, and I'm guessing would be relatively informal even in the US.
Hope this all helps anyway,
Chris
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