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My favorite place Please check and correct my sentences. I went to the Haneda international airport today. I like to watch planes from close by. It’s observation deck is one of the most favorite place. There are many foreigners there. I hope they really enjoy their trips! Thank you for your kindness!

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My Favorite Place {Main words in titles are capitalized}

Please check and correct my sentences.

I went to the Haneda International Airport today. {This is a specific airport name, so it's capitalized.}
I like to watch planes from close by. Its [1] observation deck is one of the {better: my} most favorite places. [2] There are many foreigners there.
I hope they really enjoy their trips!


Thank you for your kindness!

  1. In this case, you're referring to a "possession" or "quality" of the observation deck, so "its". "It's" is a contraction of "It is".
  2. "One of the/my..." implies that there are others, so you need the plural here (places). Also, "one of the..." suggests that it is a universal "favorite place" (i.e. something you may find in a magazine survey), so "one of my favorite places" sounds better.

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