My little boy
Last weekend I and my little boy had visiting mall. We had seen children's game place. We decided entry in game place. My son was first time not determined, but after sometime hi played with everything toys. Hi was happy and I was happy too.
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My little boy
Last weekend I and my little boy had visiting mall. We had seen children's game place. We decided entry in game place. My son was first time not determined, but after sometime hi played with everything toys. Hi was happy and I was happy too.
Last weekend my little boy and I visited a mall. We saw a children's play area, so we decided to enter. He was hesitant at first, but soon started to play with all the toys. He was happy, and I was happy too.
Some minor grammar mistakes, but I understood the whole story. Good writing!
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Last weekend I and my little son went to the mall. We saw free play area for children. We decided to enter the game place (I'd say - go to) . My son hesitated first, but after some time he started to play with all the toys. He was happy and I was happy too.
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