Trapped in the snow
Bob and Ian are professional climbers. This short story is about incident which was happened in 2008 in Antarctica.
Bob and Ian started their trip to the South pole when weather was good and silent. The sun was shining and a light wind was blowing.
It was 70 miles to the target when they decided to make a camp. Bob made an instant soup and Ian melted snow to got some water for drink. When they had eaten and rested they dismantled camp and went on.
The weather suddenly changed. The wind became blowing much stronger and it started snowing. Snow was everywhere and they couldn’t see anything. Their off-roader instantly stuck after another excavation. Some time later they decided to wait until the storm pass.
The next day they found themselves trapped in the snow. The first time they tried to dig the off-roader, but it was impossible because it was deep in the snow. Fortunately they had radio, so they used it to ask for help. After five hours waiting, rescuers arrived and pulled them out of the snow. One rescue told to Bob and Ian that they were about 20 miles from the South pole.
Bob and Ian decided not to gave up and they reached the South pole in 2009.
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Trapped in the snow
Bob and Ian are professional climbers. This short story is about incident which was that happened in 2008 in Antarctica.
Bob and Ian started their trip to the South pole when the weather was good and silent. The sun was shining and a light wind was blowing.
It was 70 miles to the target when they decided to make a camp. Bob made an instant soup and Ian melted snow to get some water for drinking (or "to get some water to drink"). When they had eaten and rested they dismantled camp and went on.
The weather suddenly changed. The wind became blowing much stronger and it started snowing. Snow was everywhere and they couldn’t see anything. Their off-roader instantly got stuck after another excavation (I'm not sure what you intended to say here. Maybe "...after they hit a ditch?"). Some time later they decided to wait until the storm passed.
The next day they found themselves trapped in the snow. The first time tThey tried to dig out the off-roader, but it was impossible because it was deep in the snow. Fortunately they had a radio, so they used it to ask for help. After five hours waiting, rescuers arrived and pulled them out of the snow. One rescuer told to Bob and Ian that they were about 20 miles from the South pole.
Bob and Ian decided not to give up and they reached the South pole in 2009.
British.
Good job!
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Trapped in the snow
Bob and Ian are professional climbers. This short story is about an incident which was that happened in 2008 in Antarctica.
Bob and Ian started their trip to the South pole when the weather was good and silent. The sun was shining and a light wind was blowing.
It was 70 miles to the target when they decided to make a camp. Bob made an instant soup and Ian melted snow to got get some water for to drink. When they had eaten and rested they dismantled the camp and went on.
The weather suddenly changed. The wind became began blowing much stronger and it started snowing. Snow was everywhere and they couldn’t see anything. Their off-roader instantly got stuck after another excavation. Some time later they decided to wait until the storm pass.
The next day they found themselves trapped in the snow. The first time they tried to dig out the off-roader, but it was impossible because it was deep in the snow. Fortunately they had radio, so they used it to ask for help. After five hours waiting (consider rewording to 'After waiting for five hours'), rescuers arrived and pulled them out of the snow. One of the rescuers told to Bob and Ian that they were about 20 miles from the South pole.
Bob and Ian decided not to gave give up and they reached the South pole in 2009.
British.
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