The Terrible day
Last night,I find me losing an important thing.It is a white bar.I need it to practicing driving.Because it is regard as a receipt.The terrible thing is it cannot be reapplied.I need to buy it again!I am really sad.I paid for my carelessness
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The Terrible day
Last night,I find me losing an important thing.It is a white bar.I need it to practicing driving.Because it is regard as a receipt.The terrible thing is it cannot be reapplied.I need to buy it again!I am really sad.I paid for my carelessness
Last night, I found that I had lost an important thing. It is a white bar. I need it to practise driving. Because it is regarded as a receipt. The terrible thing is that it cannot be reapplied for. I need to buy it again!! I am really sad. I will pay for my carelessness.
found that I had lost : since it was last night, I changed the tense, as well as "me" to "I" and "losing" to "lost".
important thing: I left this. But prefer "important item, a white bar." Thing is a awkward word. And "It is" is not needed if you join the sentences.
practise/practice: depends on US or other English. Definitely not "ing".
reapplied for: My grandmother would tell me never to end a sentence with a preposition. But I don't want to change your sentence too much.
I will pay: future tense. You probably haven't bought the new white bar yet. If you have, "paid" is perfect.
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