My message in one app for training writing skills. Can you help me to check it?
I have a conversation in an app is called Slowly.
There I have written two long message that I want to check because my partner is Russian too. I hope what someone help me here with it.
First of them:
"Hi!
Do you know the Penguin Readers series books? These are books for English learners. I read them. I haven't yet done activities from these books. I found that these activities will be useful. Example, I read "The Street Lawyer" and there are teacher's notes. There are invited to discuss some issues. I think this is a good idea for correspondence. During the reading, there are new activities with new questions for discuss."
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My message in one app for training writing skills. Can you help me to check it?
I am having conversations in an app is called Slowly.
There I have written two long message that I want to check because my partner is Russian too. I hope what someone help me here with it.
First of them:
"Hi!
Do you know the Penguin Readers series books? These are books for English learners. I read them but/although I haven't yet done the activities in these books. I think that these activities will be useful. For example, I read "The Street Lawyer" and in the back of the book, there are teacher's notes There are invited to discuss some issues UNCLEAR. better: the teachers' notes at the back of the book has some discussion questions). I think it's a good idea to use them for our ? correspondence. During the reading, there are new activities with new questions for discussion (OR questions to discuss)."
Are you suggesting that you and the other person use the discussion questions as a basis for your writing?
You can say, "I think it's a good idea to use these discussion questions as a starting point for our correspondence"
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My message in one app for training writing skills. Can you help me to check it?
I have a conversation in an app is called Slowly.
There I have written two long message that I want to check because my partner is Russian too. I hope what someone help me here with it.
First of them:
"Hi!
Do you know the Penguin Readers book series? These are books for English learners. I read them. I haven't done any activities from these books yet. I found that these activities will be useful. For example, I read "The Street Lawyer" and there were teacher's notes. There are invitations to discuss some issues. I think this is a good idea for correspondence. During the reading, there are new activities with new questions for discussion."
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