Is the following complex sentence free of errors?
However my visa still hasn't come through, I have bought a plane ticket, and I am supposed to arrive in Montreal on 23 August.
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However my visa still hasn't come through, I have bought a plane ticket, and I am supposed to arrive in Montreal on 23 August.
I have bought a plane ticket, however, my visa still hasn't come through and I'm supposed to arrive in Montreal on the 23rd of August.
This would be a better structure for that sentence.
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Thanks, Michael
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Strictly, you should replace the first comma with a full stop - or a period, if you speak US English. Then, probably, you should add a comma after your "however". https://www.grammarly.com/blog/comma-splice/. https://www.quickanddirtytips.com/education/grammar/starting-a-sentence-with-however-right-or-wrong
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