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Formal letter - Waiter job Dear Ms Harrison, I recently saw your advertisement in a local newspaper offering a job as waiter at Chilli Pepper Café and I would like to apply for the position. I have some experience of this kind of work because I have worked as waiter for more than four years. Some years ago, I worked in a local resturant of the town where I live, then I worked in a pub at night serving alcoholic and soft drinks. In addition, I am particularly good at serving customers because I am especially friendly and I am able to speak several languages such as French, German, English and Spanish. Therefore, I think that I would not have any communication problem. Also, people who know me say that I am quite funny and make people feel relaxed when they talked with me. Apart from my skills, I would like to inform you that I do not mind overworking if I earn these extra hours of work. Would you please ensure us that this will happen? I did not have good experiences in the past. Could you inform me of your final decision when you make it? Kind regards, Rubén

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Formal letter - Waiter job

Dear Ms Harrison,

I recently saw your advertisement in a local newspaper offering a job as waiter at Chilli Pepper Café and I would like to apply for the position.

I have some (1) extensive experience in this kind of work because I have worked as waiter for more than four years. Some years ago, I worked in a local restaurant in the town where I live, then I worked in a pub at night serving alcoholic and soft drinks. In addition, I am particularly good at serving customers because I am especially friendly and I am able to speak several languages such as French, German, English and Spanish. Therefore, I think that I would not have any communication problem. Also, people who know me say that I am quite funny and make people feel relaxed when they talked with me.

Apart from my skills, I would like to inform you that I do not mind working overtime if I earn these extra hours of work. Would you please ensure us that this will happen? I have not have good experiences in the past (2).

Could you inform me of your final decision when you make it?

Kind regards,

Rubén

Muy bien escrito
1= some? Me parece que 4 años es más que “some”.
2= No tiene sentido aquí. Un poco formal como no has obtenido el trabajo y estas tomando demandas.



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