I will go on.

mMy major is lLaw, but I like teaching foreign to learn English to foriegners. mMany people say I was am a good teacher. iIt made makes me so happy. I think every one is willing yo me to help others to learn their mother tougue. I love English, it opened the door to a bigger world. whenever Whoever you are, wherever you are, we can make friends only cause simply becuase we can speak some English.
oOne day, I will speak English so as well as a native speaker, it is my dream in my chindhood. This has been my dream since childhood.
gGood luck to everyone .

I will go on

my major is law, but I would like to learn people from other countries to learn English, many people say: I was a good teacher. it made me so happy. I think everyone is willing to help others to learn their mother tougue.I love English, it opened a bigger world. Whoever you are, wherever you are, we can make friends, only cause we can speak some English.
one day, I will speak English so well as a native speaker, it was my dream in my childhood.
good luck too everyone .

nice written, you forgot past form in one sentence: "it it my dream in my childhood" what you are saying here is. it is my dream, but when you talk about childhood suddenly it makes the sentence past form. "whenever you are" i dont understand that one, did you mean whoever you are?