Hi! I could help. You've got some mistakes:

new persons- it's better to use "people"

i would like speak- "I'd like to talk"

Good luck! Elena

welcome you

You can add me, I'm also here to practice, share opinios and maybe have nice talking.
 

I also would like to speak with you ahhh

Helloo, when do you want speak, send me a sms,i want to practice me english,bye