Good afternoon, everyone!
I'm going to go dinner with my friends. However, one of my friends feels sick. So, she couldn't come. We were going to go the Shinokubo. It is Korea town in Japan. We wanted eat a row octopus. We change a scheduel because She couldn't come. I hope she get better quickly. I'll go shinokubo next!
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Good afternoon, everyone! I was going to have dinner with my friends. However, one of my friends felt sick. So, she couldn't come. We were going to go to Shinokubo. It is Korea town in Japan. We wanted to eat a row octopus. We changed the schedule because she couldn't come. I hope she can get better quickly. I'll go to shinokubo next time!
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Good afternoon, everyone!
I was going to have dinner with my friends. However, one of my friends was feeling sick. So, she couldn't (alt: wasn't able to) come (alt: join us). We were going to go to (the) Shinokubo (area). It is one of the (many) Korea towns in Japan. We wanted to eat raw octopus. We changed the schedule, however, because she couldn't come. I hope she gets (alt: will get) better quickly. I'll go to shinokubo next time!
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