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I'll tell my experience about my 14th birthday. All of my friends caught me. And brought me to the pool. I mean fish pool with the dirty water. They threw me to the pool. And everyone laughed to me. At that time, i was shy. Really shy. That was my unforgettable experience . Thanks for read Correct me if I'm wrong

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I'll talk about my experience of my 14th birthday. All of my friends caught me and brought me to a pool. I mean a fish pool with dirty water. They threw me to the pool. And everyone laughed to me. At that time, I was shy, really shy. That was my unforgettable experience . Thanks for reading. Correct me if I'm wrong.
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I'll talk about my 14th birthday. All of my friends caught me and brought me to the pool. I mean a fish pool with dirty water. They threw me into the pool and everyone laughed at me. At that time, I was shy, really shy. That was my unforgettable experience. Thanks for reading Correct me if I'm wrong

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