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Feedbacks are welcomedšI think I am being verbose herešPlease bear with me :"
In Kenya some of the common things to have in a birthday party are;
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ļø Cake
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ļø Some good dance music
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ļø Some food or snacks for the guests
And of course, the host (The person who is inviting us for his/her birthday).
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Feedback is welcomedšI think I am being verbose herešPlease bear with me :"
Apa khabar WinLee?
Generally it's very clear. My own spoken English is not great but here are a few things :
1.Treat others to eat => treat others to a meal.
2.Gotta is informal => got to
3."Same with others" is not very clear. Sounds closer to "same with odders." Will be clearer if you can try to get the "h" sound in.
4. "Birthday person" is correct.
5. I couldn't get the last part. It sounded like : "... noodles and ?? eggs"
Again it is very good, not verbose at all. I'm just being really picky.
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