I like to live in a city cause there are a lots of things such as supermarket, banks, convince store, etc. But at this time of my life i would like to live in the suburbs especially in a farm with animals, a river etc. Cause I'm looking for peace to me and family.
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I like living in a city because there are a lot of things such as a supermarket,
banks, a convenience store, etc. But at this time in my life I would like to live in
the suburbs, especially on a farm with animals, a river, etc. because I'm looking
for peace for my family and I.
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“I like living in a city cause there are lots of things such as supermarkets,
banks, convenience stores, etc. But at this time in my life i would like to live in
the suburbs especially on a farm with animals, a river etc. Cause I'm looking
for peace for me and family. “
Great job, Danilo! I made some minor spelling corrections and changed some prepositions to make it more clear. Also with “lots”, since it’s plural, we don’t need the article a in front (like “a lot of”)
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I like to live in a city because there are lots of things such as supermarkets, banks, convince stores, etc. But at this time of my life, I would like to live in the suburbs especially on a farm with animals, a river, etc. because I'm looking for peace for me and my family.
:) Nice job!
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